README.md

@@ -1,17 +1,12 @@
 # 🌙 nyxexprs
 
-[Nyx]: https://github.com/notashelf/nyx
+Welcome to nyxexprs! This is my personal package overlay, for derivations I use
+from time to time when they do not fit my "monorepo" use case. This repository
+holds things I've packages, as well as derivations and a binary cache for most
+of my personal projects. It also contains packages and modules I've refactored
+out of my personal NixOS configuration, Nyx (hence the name "nyxexprs.")
 
-Welcome to Nyxexprs! This is my personal package collection and overlay, for
+Kept up to date with Github workflows and npins. Contributions welcome.
-derivations I use from time to time when they do not fit my "monorepo" use case
-in [Nyx]. This repository holds things I've packaged, which is primarily
-packages not available in Nixpkgs or Git versions of packages with the added
-convenience of a binary cache. It also contains packages and modules I've
-refactored out of my personal NixOS configuration, [Nyx] (hence the name
-"nyxexprs.")
-
-Kept up to date with Github workflows and npins. Contributions, in the form of
-Pull Requests or patches welcome.
 
 ## Usage
 
@@ -27,7 +22,8 @@ overlay is also provided through [flake-parts](https://flake.parts)'
 {
   inputs = {
     # Your Nixpkgs input
-    nixpkgs.url = "github:NixOS/nixpkgs?ref=nixos-unstable";
+    nixpkgs.url = "github:NixOS/nixpkgs/nixos-unstable";
+
 
     # Add an input as such. Do NOT add the "follows" line (a typical flakes
     # pattern) if you intend to use the binary cache.
@@ -47,10 +43,12 @@ Then get the package you need directly from inputs
   ...
 }: {
   # For this to be valid, you need `inputs` in the argset above and nyxexprs
-  # to be in your `inputs`, as demonstrated in the flake.nix example. You 
+  # to be in your `inputs`, as demonstrated in the flake.nix example
-  # will also need `inputs` to be in your `nixosSystem` call's `specialArgs`
-  # or else you will not be able to access `inputs` in your modules.
   environment.systemPackages = [
+    # `pkgs.stdenv.hostPlatform.system` is an explicit way of replacing
+    # `pkgs.system`. It is especially important on systems with aliases
+    # disabled in their nixpkgs config. Nixpkgs also likes enjoying changing
+    # things around every once in a while, so being explicit is good.
     inputs.nyxexprs.packages.${pkgs.stdenv.hostPlatform.system}.tempus # example
   ];
 }
@@ -126,5 +124,5 @@ packages missing in Cachix.
 
 ## 📜 License
 
-This repository (Nix derivations, patches, etc.) is released under EUPL v1.2.
+This repository (Nix codee, patches, etc.) is released under EUPL v1.2. Please
-Please see the [license file](./LICENSE) for more details.
+see the [license file](./LICENSE) for more details.